100 Word Challenge: Run-on sentence
He called me loquacious, he, the man that could never stop talking about himself; but I guess I was to an extent, because I wanted him to know everything about me, I wanted him to realize that there was going to be an us or we; a we, such a foreign term for this relationship, we’d never been an us or we out in the open for everyone to see-I pined for it when we were teenagers, good God above I was so desperate for his love, but this time around, it was his turn to yearn for me.
Thank you Ms. Tara R. for hosting this 100 Word Challenge. It was fun to write a run on sentence, though I do loathe them.
I like this! Make him work for it.
That’s right sista!
I agree – loathe them. Really hard to read, too; simply hurts my stomach.
Have to agree. It was super hard to write one, so it made it quite a challenge.
I can imagine.
I love a good runonsentance and this was a good one!
Thank you my friend.