I’ve decided to participate in another weekly writing project titled, picture it & write it. It is sponsored by authors Ermilia and Ermisenda. There aren’t a lot of restrictions, but it’s important for me to keep the story short and descriptive. Romantic, sexy and yes, a little dirty. Let’s give it a go.
He kisses the valley of her sex. She opens for him. Warm breath entices her to touch herself. He playfully bites the orifice of her utmost pleasure. With the middle finger of her left hand she teases the cleft of pink flesh as he engulfs her pussy with his mouth. She mashes his face into her body. She writhes. He wraps his arms around her legs and holds on tight. His warm tongue darts in and out of her. He lays it flat and laps at her. He releases her left leg and places a finger inside of her. She thrusts her hips forward to feel him. For it to sink in further. His lips flutter around her and he kisses her petals. Their fingers keep a constant rhythm. It brings her closer to the edge of ecstasy. The impending orgasm erupts and brings forth the flood only his mouth and touch can bring. As the tremors subside, he looks up at her. His dark brown eyes search her vibrant blue ones. There is serenity; contentment. With her image imprinted on his brain, he dives in and drowns in her delicious nectar.
This is hot! Really good.
Thanks Deana dear. It was a short story, but it was fun to write.
Love, Renee
Genius….
Aw Neal my sweet, thank you.
Love, Renee
Yeah, that was pretty damn Hawt! Now get on that novel! Daddy needs to read about
Got cut off there.,, Daddy needs to read about some sex from a woman’s point of view, and that doesn’t involve words like “down there” or “inner goddess!”
Did it get cut off because you were typing one handed? Hahahahahahaha
For cripes I would NEVER use those words. I even like the word cunt for the love of Bob. I’m not a normal woman my dear. I try to write with both a dick and vajayjay. And my heart too.
I promise, the novel is coming. And so are the main character. Giggle. But there’s so much more to the story than that.
Love, Renee
Good! Keep it dirty, keep it honest. I have it on good authority that woman are as in to dirty, smutty sex as much as men. Please back me up on this one 🙂
Oh yes honey we are. I like porn too. I’m not afraid to admit to it. I’m not a normal woman. I keep trying to tell everyone that. Giggle.
Love that last line.
I kinda did too. Thanks my sweetheart.
Love, Renee
Hot stuff!
And oh so fun to write.
Yeah, it sure was fun to write. Now onto Friday Fictioneers. And maybe a journal entry too.
Kisses, Renee
Yum!!! Lovely story Renee
I think I liked the line about his eyes the best. 🙂 The word nectar I stole from your most recent chapter. I knew you wouldn’t mind though. Giggle.
Love, Renee
it was a really nice story, i love the way the passion shows in your writing. Did i say nectar? Wow i didnt even realise lol. but of course i dont mind 🙂
Thanks hon. I like nice. And sensual. Slow. This one was too short. Maybe I’ll write more. We’ll see.
XOXOXOXOXO
Renee
If this is raunchy, Renee, what’s the novel going to be like?!!! I can hardly wait! You started on that yet girl?
I hope this isn’t raunchy. I like sensual. Let the reader draw the images in their mind. The novel is started. Outline is complete and some of the chapters are too. It’s set in London so there’s a shit ton of research I need to do. Hard to write a novel about a place I’ve never been to before. Fortunately, I have some good friends that live there. Hopefully they’ll help me with the geography.
Love, Renee
Ohlala….this is a delicious one, Renee!
Short, sweet and to the point. Giggle. I’m glad you liked it. How are you my dear E?
Love, Renee
I went with the very first words that crossed my…mind after reading the last sentence 😀
Just tip-toeing through the piles of snow and “carrying” spring inside already. Or still. 🙂 And enjoying the warmth of your posts! Much love back, Ese
I loved your Haiku that you wrote today. So pretty. As you are, I’m sure.
Love, Renee
Awww, thank you! Really appreaciated, Renee 🙂
Oooh! Good one!
Thank you my sweet. Search for more stories if you’d like. 😉
Kisses, Renee
The tingles you have made me feel! I should’ve known with the image I chose for this week that there’d be erotica. I didn’t realise it would be this powerful. Great allusions to flowers with the references to petals, nectar, rather than being boring and stating simply ‘her flower’. You used the comparison much more creatively. The opening sentence grabbed me and your story didn’t release me until the end ‘the valley of her sex’. So very sexy. I hope to read more of your work, Renee! Thanks for contributing this week to Picture it & write. 🙂
– Ermisenda
Honey, your words humble me. Can you believe I didn’t even think about the words nectar and petals when I wrote them. It kinda flowed out of me. And her too. 🙂
I’m glad you could feel it. I could too. I want it to be sexy, sensual and dirty. I do not want it to be raunchy or schmaltzy. I want my words to celebrate the act of sex. I certainly hope that’s what you took from it.
I can’t wait to write more stories to your photos.
Love, Renee
That was really good! I love the way you describe such kind of scene!
Thanks my dear. I’m glad you liked it.
Love, Renee
I find myself so peaceful after reading this. An genuine afterglow. 🙂 Keep writing, madame!
My dear that is quite the compliment. Thank you so much. I will keep writing till the day I die. I hope to anyway.
Love, Renee
Eh, not bad ;).
I’m glad you think so. Wink, wink.
Love, Renee
Your writing has effects you know Renee! This is a lovely scene.
My dear friend that compliment means a lot to me. Your writing has effects on me too. I love reading you.
Love, Renee
oh.my.god.
That was SOOOOO hot 😮
I love the way you describe it! it’s hot, dirty and yet so beautifully sweet and ‘innocent’.
LOVE IT! ❤
Glad you liked it honey. I’m not scared to write erotica anymore. I rather enjoy it. So do my readers. I have so many scenarios floating around me. Can’t wait to grab a few more and write them down.
❤
and I can’t wait to read them! you’re making me erotica addicted X
Clicking another PI&W link – free.
Getting all worked up reading the erotica – hehe, something was spent.
Clicking the Pepsi ad at the bottom and watching the can spray – priceless!
Oh Anne I love your comment. Every bit of it. I’m glad you liked the story. I always wanted to be in one of those kinds of commercials and you did just that for me. LOVE IT!
XOXOXOXOXOX, Renee