Picture It and Write It-Nectar

I’ve decided to participate in another weekly writing project titled, picture it & write it. It  is sponsored by authors Ermilia and Ermisenda. There aren’t a lot of restrictions, but it’s important for me to keep the story short and descriptive. Romantic, sexy and yes, a little dirty. Let’s give it a go.


He kisses the valley of her sex. She opens for him. Warm breath entices her to touch herself. He playfully bites the orifice of her utmost pleasure. With the middle finger of her left hand she teases the cleft of pink flesh as he engulfs her pussy with his mouth. She mashes his face into her body. She writhes. He wraps his arms around her legs and holds on tight. His warm tongue darts in and out of her. He lays it flat and laps at her. He releases her left leg and places a finger inside of her. She thrusts her hips forward to feel him. For it to sink in further. His lips flutter around her and he kisses her petals. Their fingers keep a constant rhythm. It brings her closer to the edge of ecstasy. The impending orgasm erupts and brings forth the flood only his mouth and touch can bring. As the tremors subside, he looks up at her. His dark brown eyes search her vibrant blue ones. There is serenity; contentment. With her image imprinted on his brain, he dives in and drowns in her delicious nectar.

42 thoughts on “Picture It and Write It-Nectar

      • Did it get cut off because you were typing one handed? Hahahahahahaha

        For cripes I would NEVER use those words. I even like the word cunt for the love of Bob. I’m not a normal woman my dear. I try to write with both a dick and vajayjay. And my heart too.

        I promise, the novel is coming. And so are the main character. Giggle. But there’s so much more to the story than that.

        Love, Renee

    • I hope this isn’t raunchy. I like sensual. Let the reader draw the images in their mind. The novel is started. Outline is complete and some of the chapters are too. It’s set in London so there’s a shit ton of research I need to do. Hard to write a novel about a place I’ve never been to before. Fortunately, I have some good friends that live there. Hopefully they’ll help me with the geography.

      Love, Renee

  1. The tingles you have made me feel! I should’ve known with the image I chose for this week that there’d be erotica. I didn’t realise it would be this powerful. Great allusions to flowers with the references to petals, nectar, rather than being boring and stating simply ‘her flower’. You used the comparison much more creatively. The opening sentence grabbed me and your story didn’t release me until the end ‘the valley of her sex’. So very sexy. I hope to read more of your work, Renee! Thanks for contributing this week to Picture it & write. 🙂

    – Ermisenda

    • Honey, your words humble me. Can you believe I didn’t even think about the words nectar and petals when I wrote them. It kinda flowed out of me. And her too. 🙂

      I’m glad you could feel it. I could too. I want it to be sexy, sensual and dirty. I do not want it to be raunchy or schmaltzy. I want my words to celebrate the act of sex. I certainly hope that’s what you took from it.

      I can’t wait to write more stories to your photos.

      Love, Renee

  2. Clicking another PI&W link – free.
    Getting all worked up reading the erotica – hehe, something was spent.
    Clicking the Pepsi ad at the bottom and watching the can spray – priceless!

    • Oh Anne I love your comment. Every bit of it. I’m glad you liked the story. I always wanted to be in one of those kinds of commercials and you did just that for me. LOVE IT!

      XOXOXOXOXOX, Renee

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